Editing Services

Stories are my deepest passion. Since I was young, I’ve broken stories apart, stitched them back together, studied them, critiqued them, fallen in love with them. The written word is a remarkable way of telling a story, and it’s my privilege to be able to work with authors on stories they want to bring out into the world.

I work best at developing worlds, characters, and the plots you’re interweaving throughout the novel.

  • Foundation in Creative Writing by the Open University
  • Proofreading and Copyediting Accredited by John Academy London
  • Entertainment Editor for an online magazine for 3+ years
  • CP’d a VERY SECRET but VERY AWESOME book – publishing in 2019!
  • Two Best Film awards at local festivals for my magical realism / fantasy dramas
  • Pitch Madness winner 2017
  • PitchWars alum class of 2017

Having written YA and Adult Fantasy / Science Fiction for some time now I’m best editing YA and ADULT manuscripts in the following categories:

FANTASY (all subs)

I am VERY comfortable with diversity and LGBTQA+. If you have an #ownvoices book or if you’re a diverse author, please let me know and I’ll happily do you a discount!

For queries – any and all genres!



I am supportive, honest, and will tell you where your strengths are. I propose questions which make you think more about your MS and the information the reader needs or wants to see. My passion for novels as a writer and a reader transfers into editing – I want to make your book sing, and it’s the developmental stages where I can help most.

I can also focus on grammar, if that is something you feel you need.

Two of my short film dramas, both with fantastical elements (now I realise it was magical realism) won Best Drama. I was praised for my characterization not only in dialogue but in what I did to show it. I’m great with characters, and I know how to make individual voices shine.  I’m excellent on natural, character-driven dialogue, pacing and plot holes. I’m not afraid to tell you if you get too rambly! But I want to help you bring out the core of the story you’re trying to tell.




“I hired Jade for my Urban Fantasy first in series and I found her comments to be very helpful. She pointed out where I could add in more details and scenes to help strengthen character bonds and scenery. She also points out the bits she likes, which gives my ego a little boost ;)

Reasonably priced, as she does two passes of the MS.

Thanks so much, Jade!” – N.D Iverson, author of New Wings




“Jade was so encouraging! After receiving conflicting feedback on my query, I over-edited it into a disaster. Jade pointed out everything that needed clarification and gave much needed direction for how to fix it. I definitely recommend her services!” – Amber R. Duell, author of Dream Keeper due in 2018 – @AmberR_Duell

“Ms. Hemming’s feedback proved to be invaluable. She saved my query from doom. Her critique comments force the writer to re-examine everything about the query, from the theme, the plot structure, and the characters. I would recommend her services to any writer who seeks representation.” – B. Spencer Edwards – @bspenceredwards

“Having Jade look at two passes of my query has helped me identify the key parts needing attention, and my query feel much stronger now with her feedback. Jade picks up on the little things, and also looks at the bigger picture and overall layout. Definitely recommend her skilled eye and attention to detail for your editorial needs!” – Nicole L. – @Nicole_Lowrey

“Jade has done a few passes on my queries and a developmental edit on my manuscript, and she is a very insightful editor, offering poignant and constructive advice. She is very prompt and thorough with her work, and I found her suggestions very helpful. You won’t be disappointed with her work! :)” – Kelly B – @kbarina13

“Jade gives prompt and detailed feedback, focusing on both a query’s strong points and its weaknesses. I appreciated her identifying exactly what needed to be fixed and how to do it. She clearly has a lot of knowledge about the publishing process. My current query feels ready for agents. I highly recommend her services.” -Katherine T @bookgirl_kt

“I was stuck for SO long thinking this story wasn’t worth it. Not only did you restore my faith but you showed me the direction I needed to go to get me back on track. THANK YOU!” – Denise T.

“It’s like you knew my characters better than I do. Thanks so much!” – Sandi M.

PRICES (for prices in USD or other, please let me know!):

QUERY (+ 1 pass) – £10
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SYNOPSIS up to 2 pages (+1 pass) – £20 HALF PRICE – £10
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FIRST 5 PAGES (+1 pass) – £15
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FIRST CHAPTER (up to 30 pages) – £35 HALF PRICE £17
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FIRST 3 CHAPTERS (up to 70 pages) – £55 HALF PRICE – £27
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FULL MS (up to 300 pages) – £1 a page. HALF PRICE – 50p per page – Contact Me

FULL MS (up to 500 pages) – £1.25 a page. HALF PRICE – 75p per page – Contact Me

FULL MS – 500 pages or more – please contact me for pricing

  • All orders up to First Page delivered in 48 hours.
  • First Chapter or First 3 Chapters, 72 hours.
  • FULL MS delivered in 1- 2 weeks depending on length or individual needs.

For  more information or to book, please contact on jadewritesbooks@gmail.com.

I usually take payments through PayPal invoice, which is able to be processed with many cards or a PayPal account. Let me know if you prefer Google payments.


2 thoughts on “Editing Services

  1. Jade. Is. Amazing. She caught details after one pass that I never noticed over multiple readings. Her feedback is logical and insightful, she has a brilliant editorial eye, and at times she had me laughing out loud with her comments. She’s helped me with my query and first chapter, so my submission package is as good as ready!

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