Top 5 Wednesday

Top 5 Wednesday: Favorites You’d Like to Revisit

I’m not a big re-reader, but I have re-read Vicious this year, and Darker Shades of Magic last year, so… perhaps I should make some exceptions.


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This book made me fall in love again with reading — I adore it, and I’ve only read it once! I need to fix that this year.

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I haven’t re-read this in so long. I only read the last two books once, but I read the others countless times. I think I need to re-read the whole series, even though JK isn’t my favourite so much any more.

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I’m not going to lie, I am going to re-read this series for Nikolai alone.

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I last read these when I was…. gosh, 15?! And I didn’t read the ending because I didn’t want the film to be spoiled (I adored the film). So I should re-read this. And skip Bombadil because he pissed me off.



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Unfortunately I have NO idea who started this tag, but whoever you are – thank you!

B E S T   B O O K   O F   T H E   Y E A R   S O   F A R?


I had no idea what to expect going into this series and oh my gosh… this was amazing. I loved it. I was creeped out, gripped, in turmoil… I adored the dialogue and the formats. Sometimes I even tried to imagine what it would be like in TV series form.


A   N E W   R E L E A S E   Y O U   H A V E N ‘ T   R E A D   Y E T ,   B U T   W A N T   T O?

Undead Girl Gang The Wicked Deep


M O S T   A N T I C I P A T E D   R E L E A S E   F O R   A U T U M N / W I N T E R?

Strap in cause… there’s a few

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35430702 The Disasters

B I G G E S T   D I S A P P O I N T M E N T   O F   T H E   Y E A R   S O   F A R?


A Discovery of Witches (All Souls Trilogy, #1) // Children of Blood and Bone (Legacy of Orïsha, #1)

DOW — I really wanted to love this one, but in the first chapter we had SEVEN PAGES of backstory. Seven. Pages. I didn’t NEED all that backstory, I just wanted to know the fricking plot. I DNF’d this.

CBAB — Another one I really wanted to love but… I couldn’t. I also DNF’d this. I didn’t connect to the voice or the characters, there was a lot of rushing, and I got lost.

B I G G E S T   S U R P R I S E   O F   T H E   Y E A R   S O   F A R?


I’m gonna sound like a broken record, but for a book with SUCH a different format I’d never read before, and a space opera which had zombies in it… I hate zombies… I actually adored it. One of the best series I’ve ever read and this opener has a special place in my heart.

N E W   F A V O U R I T E   A U T H O R?

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Holly Black’s book was simple mastery, and Mackenzi Lee’s book had humour and voice by the absolute bucket load.

Y O U R   N E W E S T   F I C T I O N AL   C R U S H?

……oh boy.

It has to be Gavriel in COLDEST GIRL.  A curly-haired vampire who’s sneaky, seductive, from another time, who clearly adores Tana and is a softie at heart? Thanks yes please.

Y O U R   N E W E S T   F A V O U R I T E   C H A R A C T E R?


KADY from Illuminae- A badass pink-haired fiesty girl who codes, kicks arse and takes names, and generally has an amazing ethic about her. Brave, stubborn, and just completely amazing.

TANA from Coldest Girl – Every single choice she made was something I would do – she didn’t whine, she didn’t bitch, she was as natural as they came.

A   B O O K   T H A T   M A D E   Y O U   C R Y?

I don’t actually remember crying much this year… maybe that’ll change when I read the end of Obsidio, though

A   B O O K   T H A T   M A D E   Y O U   H A P P Y?


Nuff said

T H E   M O S T   B E A U T I F U L   B O O K   S O   F A R?

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Top 5 Wednesday

TOP 5 WEDNESDAY: Books You’ve Removed From Your TBR

— Discuss the books that you wanted to read at one point, but don’t anymore

This is a difficult topic, mainly because I have the memory of a fish and therefore can’t remember what I put ON my tbr in the last hour.

I’ve done some clearing TBR posts before, so I might borrow from a few of those.


I read the first one, NIGHT WATCH and it really annoyed me mainly because of the girlfriend and how she was portrayed as someone nitpicking and stupid. Also I read the author was a bit of a dickwand, so I decided not to bother with this.


A dear friend recommended this to me after I came out of hospital with a crush on my surgeon, since the protagonist here also has the same issue. But I no longer have a crush on my surgeon (he’s probably still pretty hot to be fair) and I won’t ever read this, so.


Ok so this cover does NOT reveal it’s about aliens and mind control. From this you’d think it was a nice, magical-realism or contemporary romance or something, but no. It’s aliens. And it’s about Special Characters Who Don’t Conform. So I decided early on that this wouldn’t be on my list.


The consensus with this… as well as what I’ve actually heard from friends – is that the romance gets in the way of plot with this one. And that’s generally not what I’m in the mood for. The author is absolutely lovely but I’ll check out her other works instead.


I WAS SO EXCITED to read this book, because it had so many great reviews… and then I read an excerpt of this and it was painful with its exposition dialogue and no.

PitchWars · Writing Advice

So. You wanna enter PitchWars, do ya?

(title is best imagined as me with one of those candy sticks as a fake cigarette in my mouth and a Columbo-esque brogue)

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PitchWars is one of the biggest writing contests on Twitter. I first read about it in 2015, since there were so many excited tweets, and I was lucky enough to be a mentee last year, but the contest is only a middle step for many of the writers picked to be mentees–and for those who aren’t.

For those of you gearing up to enter PitchWars 2018 this post will hopefully give you a glimpse into the whole kit and kaboodle and prepare you for what is to come, whether you’re picked or not.


In 2015 I applied with the Adult Fantasy I’d written and finally completed after 10 years. I didn’t get in (and rightfully so).

2016, I applied with my YA sci-fi. I was picked as an unofficial mentee by M.K. England (her book is coming out in December!) and Jamie Pacton. Their advice was absolutely amazing, and while I got some agent interest with the MS I nevertheless didn’t get an offer. I took their advice on board when writing my next book.

2017, I applied with my third completed MS, a YA fantasy. I WAS PICKED! I was an official mentee, mentored by the wonderful Cat Scully. I was part of a grand community of talented and kind mentees, all going through the same thing. After intense revisions, I entered the agent round full of hope. I got 2 requests, but when querying it turned into rejections. I revised again, and sent out more queries, but it still wasn’t to be.

2018 – I’ve written my 4th MS – a YA speculative – and I’ve noticed how much easier it’s been to tackle this book with the knowledge I gained from the contest and, yes, the rejections I received. I am not planning on entering PitchWars this year (though don’t hold me to that, because it’s easy to get caught up in the rush of it) but I am getting involved with #PWPoePrompts and engaging on the feeds again!

With the recent shake up in the PW community I’ve watched / discussed the new format  which I LOVE. Yes, the contest might have fewer mentors this year, but it will not provide any less knowledge or gravitas when it comes to drawing in writers who want that mentorship. The #menteeshelpingmentees contest drew in over 700 entries — holy crap — for 200 critique places.

When you see it from that scale, the odds may seem stacked against you. But to be honest – that’s publishing. The key to rising out of the slush and getting an agent is hard work, and PitchWars will teach you the merits of that and more. But first–you want to get into the competition, right?


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The key to surviving the PitchWars experience (not to mention your entire writing career) is the community  you build. One of my dearest CP’s and I met during PW about 2 years ago, and she’s one of my best friends now. Even when I didn’t get in to PW those first few tries, I still managed to find and enjoy talking to a whole bunch of authors who connected on a very spiritual level (read: crying over words).

You MUST reach out to connect with other writers if you want to stay balanced on this journey. As the mentor bloghop comes around, then the windows open, and then the agonising wait happens, and THEN the mentees are picked – it can be exhausting on top of every other emotion you feel.

Writing is an isolating business before, and sometimes even after, you’re agented so it’s always best to get fellow potential PW contestants on the same path to talk to in order to survive the sheer volume of this competition!


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Until recently I didn’t think I could write a query to save my life. I could edit one, the same as I could edit others’ stories, but my own novels were not able to be put in query format. All the “How to write a perfect query” posts I read didn’t seem to make sense until last month, when I sat down, wrote out the heart of my story, and had it critiqued by an incredibly-supportive agent who had only one note to give me (not gonna lie I almost fainted).

All of the research I’d done culminated in that one query, so it might have taken a while to sink in but researching WORKS. As I critique queries myself, I notice there’s always a few who omit their bios or word counts (both are important but word counts are essential), or just talk about the themes of the book rather than what it’s actually about or go into so much detail the truth of the story gets lost.

On average, agents can get over 300 queries every week. 300 people, per WEEK, asking an agent to love their book. You need it to be concise, effective and true to you and your story.

Query Shark is a notable source of querying nuggets, CPs should be able to tell you what works, you have various sites and YouTube videos giving tips on how to create an amazing query.


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Revise those open pages, darlings.

Your writing is the best way to snare both mentor and agent alike–they want to sip at the glorious cup of your carefully crafted words and enjoy the story you’re about to tell. The first chapter should be the insight into your book–character, tone, hints of themes, plot, motivation, and worldbuilding all have to be in some sort of evidence in that first chapter, if not even the first page.

I would say the first line, but that’s sometimes too much like a mountain to climb, so we’ll go safe with the first page.

If you can set the tone for the rest of your novel in that first page, and draw the reader in to want to stay there, you have it. But as before, first chapters can be tough. Share them with CPs, read them aloud to yourself (seriously!) or get a thing like to test how it sounds out loud.


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PitchWars is VERY PUBLIC. If you’re entering and you have Twitter, don’t be one of the hopefuls who complain or moan about how long it takes, or that you haven’t had requests–or, come to think of it, boasting that you HAVE. That shit is to discuss in private with your writer friends, who will understand what you’re going through and support you along the way.

Airing out your dirty laundry on social media isn’t a good look. Help those who need help, show support, be humble, stay calm, and be sure to take breaks to help keep your head in this experience.

You might think you have better writing than someone who you swapped chapters with–fine! Maybe they’re not at the same level as you. That doesn’t give you a reason to gloat about it or feed your ego.

You might think the contest is too unfairly stacked against you, since you must be the only one without requests: I promise you, you’re not, and it’s nothing personal against you. Do what you need to get your head sorted, walk away, and return with more experience when you feel ready.

Ever hear about being nice to people on the way up just in case you meet them on the way down? Yeah. That.

Be kind to yourself and to others. It’ll take you a LONG way.


WITH ALL THAT BEING SAID – Still want to enter? You should!!! It’s an intense time but it gets you out there, connecting, excited about writing and engaging in a community full of heart.

The full list of mentors is live HERE!

If you want to know more about PitchWars, their website with full deets is here – but if you have any questions about my experience, leave them below! I’ll be happy to answer them.

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Preparing your query or just have an MS you need editing? I can help! I have spots open all summer for developmental edits, query critiques and proofreading. Email me – – or visit Cover to Cover Edits for more information on how to reserve your place!





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Let me preface this by saying I haven’t read many vampire books in my lifetime. It’s a tragedy, I know, a heresy, how terrible – but given the overwhelming choice of not-very-appealing-to-me books for my beloved vampire genre, I chose instead to watch things like Buffy or reruns of Dracula.

Because to me, vampires have become pretty diluted – either sparkly or romantic, with none of the menace vampires were originally known for.


This was my first Holly Black book and I’m very eager to read another. Her protagonist was realistic, all of her choices were exactly the same as the ones I would do, she was not whining, she was incredibly mature and basically… I would be her friend, if I could. I really appreciated the time and effort that was taken into making sure she was a fleshed out and realistic character.

Another plus was the inclusion of bisexual characters without it being a Big Thing and also a trans character who I absolutely loved – she was so sweet, and (SPOILERS) she was able to get the boy, too, which was A+ in my book.

On to… Gavriel. Sweet Gavriel. Gorgeous Gavriel. I have another favourite oh dear. He was such an interesting character that I found myself looking for him on the page, and I adored him.

Holly’s writing is so… effortless in this book and I easily swept along with the world. I adored it. I understood every choice, every beat. I would have loved to spend more time in Gavriel’s past – the chapters where we slunk back into the 1800s felt lush as a chaise lounge, and incredibly rich. I’m waiting for Holly Black to write a historical fantasy, cause damn.

AND IT WAS GORY. It never shied away from the realistic truth that vampires are brutal, and turning changes you. I loved the modern inflections cause let’s face it, everyone would watch a vampire reality stream if the world turned out the way of this book, so yes. Adored. It.

A rare 5* to this one! Another favourite.

Going to try and find a hardback, since the copy I bought was ex-library.


Top 5 Wednesday

T5W: Best Books You’ve Read So Far in 2018

If you want to join in on Top 5 Wednesday this July, the link to the Goodreads group is here!

SO. What are the top 5 books I’ve spent this year reading? I’ve re-read Vicious, so I won’t include that because it’s technically not new, and I want to include new reads for this list.


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This book, man. This book SHIT ME UP. I was gripped, it was so tense, I was weirded out, I cried. I adored it in every sense. EASILY a new favourite.

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This book has my heart — Monty is such an arse but a loveable one, and I can’t wait for Petticoats to come out! Mackenzi has such a brilliant writing style and voice

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THORNS reignited my love of fairy tales and the Grisha world. Bardugo is my auto buy author, and the story about the sea witch stole it for me.


I haven’t finished this yet, but I LOVE IT. This is my first Holly Black book, and her writing is so pristine – I don’t hate the main character, either, which is rare for YA novels these days, and there are QUEER PEOPLE IN HERE ❤ it’s not all about their sexuality they’re just queer. Love it.

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Oops…. the second book in the Illuminae files takes another spot. I was toying with the idea of others, and while this one wasn’t as amazing as the first (imo) I still enjoyed it far more than other books I’ve read so far this year that could have made the list.